Related Work
来源：https://zhuanlan.zhihu.com/p/368677897
（一种很典型的行文方式：把所有工作摊煎饼地摆出来，反正我列出来了，哪个有用你自己找)
“做这个工作的有ABCD, A 做了xxx，B做了xxx，C和D做了xxx” ——类似的句式，不要再这样写啦。写相关工作的时候，作者应该是充当一种指路人，或者说书人的角色：在详细介绍核心内容之前，把故事背景在读者面前慢慢地，有条理地展开。
所以，你需要把面前的相关文献们，用一条线串起来，来向读者展现它们之间，以及和自己工作之间的关联。这些逻辑可能是递进的：例如文章ABC开创了某个领域，DEF在这个问题领域提出了集中思路，GHI则是在各个思路下的改进——那么我们就可以先说用总领的话来叙述ABC，然后用并列的方式讲DEF，最后可以一笔带过GHI（如果它们不是那么重要的话）。
这些逻辑可能是并列的：例如文章ABC用了X技术来解决某个问题，DEF用了Y技术，而GHI则用了DrustZ的技术——那么我们可以使用分条列举的方式，先写”为了解决某个问题，大家采用了不同的方法“，然后列出1）X技术[ABC] 2）Y技术[DEF] 3) DrustZ的技术[GHI] 。这样把类似的文章集中起来，大家看着也顺溜。
还有些其他不怎么常见的逻辑顺序，比如分-总（例如先有零散的工作，后来有一篇文献把它们综合了起来）。但是当我们意识到文献内在的逻辑顺序，并且把它们按照逻辑列举出来的时候，就已经比许多论文的相关文献高出了不止一个档次：）
更加高级的写作方式，则是与其列举文献，更像是让文献为作者自己的陈述服务。你在阅读的过程中，很难感觉到作者在刻意塞进一些文献来充数；相反，作者是在整理自己的思路，顺便引用了关键的文献来加以佐证。
开头不要直接列别人的文章，先概括地说一下这个段落的主题；写完一个小部分，不要立即跳到下一段开始写另一个部分，而是在末尾写一个过渡句：“以上就是人们在X领域的研究，但是随着Y技术的进步，更多的人把目光转移到了Z上”，“对于Y技术在X领域的研究已经介绍许多，但在另一个Z方面，相同的技术也有许多应用”。拿出小学作文满分的本领来！
我老板写Related Work有一个习惯，从来不会在大标题下什么都不写就直接跳到第一个小标题（例如上边那个反例）。在大标题的下面，用一些总领的语言来概括+引出接下来的小章节，其实也是一个很好的过渡方式。一切为了读者服务！
结果
作者：平海鸥鸣
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